Wednesday, May 28, 2008

THE MONOLOGUE

I speak and he listens

My eyes sparkling, face animated, hands moving in every direction.
I go on and on, my mind frantically trying to recollect the tiniest of details, determined not to miss anything.

I speak and he listens

He listens with rapt attention, looking intently into my eyes, with an occasional nod at the right places, as if here lays the purpose of his existence.

I speak and he listens

Sometimes looking in his eyes while speaking, I wonder. Is this an act, a facade? Wherein his mind lies elsewhere. Perhaps at this very moment, thinking what to buy for Neha’s birthday or when to get his guitar fixed.

I speak and he listens

Looking in his eyes, I see attentiveness; I see tenderness, and a hint of something even close to fascination. The shadow of doubt disappears.
The monologue continues

I speak and he listens

7 comments:

Unknown said...

:)

Brilliant work!

Tanaya said...

thanks!!

Unknown said...

Long time no post.

Writer's block, eh? ;)

Tanaya said...

everyone's not as good as you;) your latest post is amazingly accurate..and the sheer intensity of commenting on ur blog left me feeling dat u need no furthur appreciation..

Unknown said...

Thank you.

But you know what, the number of comments means nothing.

I look forward to comments from those who understand my post as well as I do, and have something to add rather than just appreciation.

Sadly, out of 40 comments, I find only 15 which qualify for what I want.

Clark Kent said...

this is post is wayy deep ,any inspirations?? tryin' to guess what is he thinkin' 'bout is really so fantastic in the post..n the last stanza is just so so revealing yaar...wayy cool...obituary is fine too..sab kuch planned hjai,right??

Tanaya said...

inspiration? well mayb;)
depth?? no ya..dis is just the usual way a typical female mind functions..!